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    moms fighting part 2

    Moms FIighting part 2



    From my hidden spot on the stairs I could see mom grabbing and twisting at Andreas breasts they were both grunting and struggling on the floor. Mom was in blue cut off jeans and a white tank top her shirt was already ripped a bit and pushed up so her white bra was showing.

    Mom had moved too far up Andreas body and lost her balance. Andrea was able to roll her off and jump to her feet. Andreas shirt was hanging off her and her bra was still around her neck but she was on her feet before mom and just when mom was making it her feet Andrea charged strait at her knocking her over the arm of the couch. Andrea landed so she was sitting across moms stomach on the couch moms legs were in the air over the couch arm so she had no leverage to try to push Andrea off. Andrea started punching and slapping down on my moms face and tits she ripped my moms shirt clean off then stood up and used my moms bra to pull my mom to her feet.

    She pulled mom up with her left hand and punched her in the jaw with her right. Mom fell back on the couch stunned and in big trouble. When mom fell her bra ripped off and stayed in Andreas hand. Andrea wrapped what was left around moms neck and rolled mom over on her stomach with it. ANdrea sat on moms back and reached under mom. I couldn't tell what she was doing until she got up and started pulling moms now undone shorts off. Mom tried to stop Andrea from taking down her shorts and tried to get her bra free from around her neck but could do neither and ended up laying on the living room floor in just her black thong. Andrea once again got on my moms back trapping her on her stomach and used the bra to choke her with her left hand and punched at the side of moms head and her tits and stomach with her right.

    People that know this story ask why I didn't jump in to save mom. the best I can answer is that it was a fair fight I don't think mom would have wanted me too. Besides honestly in the moment I was too stunned to do anything.

    Mom started waiving her arms trying to give up. I saw ANdrea lean forward and i could tell they were talking. I saw mom nod her head then Andrea got off her. At first I didn't understand why she held onto the bra around moms neck but when mom got to her knees she turned facing ANdrea and undid her shorts and pulled them and her panties down and off.

    Andrea used the bra around moms neck to pull moms head in and I watched as my defeated mother began to eat out the women who had just beaten her up in our own house. After a few minutes I could hear Andrea moaning and then I could see her hips quiver and i knew she came in moms mouth.

    Andrea backed up and undid the bra from around moms neck and stood looking down at mother on her knees before her. My mom looked defeated she had marks on her face and tits from the punches and slaps and rug burns on her knees and elbows from the carpet. Slowley mom got up I watched not sure what would happen next.

    Andrea held out her hand and mom slowley bent over and pulled down her panties and handed them to ANdrea who then dressed fixing her shirt as best she could slapped moms face once more and then left taking moms panties as a trophy and leaving mom a mess on the couch.

    I was sure moms injuries werent serious and I didn't want to have to explain why I didn't do anything so I snuck back to my room and waited till it was time when I usually get home from school to go and get my car.

    When Kendall got home she could tell something had happend so mom had to tell her and me the story only the story she told us was missing some key details like Andrea making mom eat her out. Kendall was pissed and mom and her swore revenge as soon as mom recovered from her injuries. Kendall and mom are proud women and Andrea having one up on them was unacceptable.

    All I knew is I had to figure out a way to see the next fight.

    ** Authors note** I know Im no great writer but I have read these boards for a long time and I know that some stories are better than no stories. It seems that new stories used to show up all the time now only a few writers seem to contribute like cage. THanks to those who write and I hope more people will contribute and make this board stronger.

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    Re: moms fighting part 2

    great start .... really great start.... please continue

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    Re: moms fighting part 2

    Oh yes, definitely a good story, and nice job on the fight, could of frawn it out a little onger and added a few moves (like a good knww/kick to the ccrotch, a prsonal favorite) but otherwise good work. (the advice/siggestions are only my perosnal taste, feel free use or to ignore it) I do hope you'll do a sequel with a M/d vs M/d fight.

    MikeJV

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    Re: moms fighting part 2

    GREAT story! keep up the good work! Maybe you can do another story with your mom versus a black mom. I wrote some stories myself and will be posting one day soon. Again congrats! and keep the stories coming!

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